My Narrative Story

This is my narrative story and the topic we had to write about was about the bush please leave a comment if anything in my story was intresting.

My Speech Presentation

This is the speech presentation I presented in front of the whole class please leave I comment if
something in my speech inspired you.

Peter,Joaquinn - Main Idea Summary Frame

This is mine and Joaquinn's main summary frame about the text, 'to work or not'.

HTML for our school movies - Manaiakalani Film Festival

Sometimes you lose stuff and gain stuff but at the end of the day its is important to take care of your belongings or else it will be the finders keepers game.

 

HTML for our school movies - Manaiakalani Film Festival

Manaiakalani Film Festival Trailer - Tamaki Primary School Movies from Tamaki Primary on Vimeo.

Renne, Charday, Ngatokorua, Deandra and Peter's Analysing lyrics...hopeful

This is a presentation that Renee, Charday, ngatokorua Deandra And I did about  this called hopeful by twister.

Kamaka Peter And Pate's Think...(My inference chart)

This a chart about a book called super Finn and here are some things about him.

Kamaka Pate And Peter's Tic Tac Toe Note Tacking Chart

This is a tic tac toe note taking chart about a book called super Finn

Intergrity

This is a Google drawing about what integrity is and means to me

My Inquiry Venn Diagram

Inferring chart

This is a chart that Kamaka and I did for the novel called flat Stanly.

My goals

My Four Walls Of Self

What A Narrative Needs

My Metaphor

This is a metaphor about my family and what describes my family about.

My Zine

This is my zine about my life and what describes me.

The Paw

The Paw...

 There's this book that is very interesting  and it's about I girl that save's people. Her name is Leonie but she called her self THE PAW but that's her super hero name.What's happening in the story so far is that she rescued a person. She saved a old man. He was captured by two robbers that wanted to know were all of is cash was Because he lived in a shop with a lot of money.Suddenly the paw popped up in the middle of nowhere and scared away the two robbers with a toy mice. The two robbers felt frighten and jumped out of window.

popplet of literacy

this is a popplet about how literacy changed from past and present.

My Personal Goals For Term 3

My personal goals for term 3 by peter_teao on GoAnimate

My Reading Goals For This Term

My reading goals for this term by Peter Jessie on GoAnimate

This is short video about my reading goals for Term 3.

media studies

Tuakana Teina Day With Room 4

Room 7 and Room 4 worked together this week. Press play to find out what tuakana/teina day is all about. 


Tuakana Teina Day from Tamaki Primary on Vimeo.

Tuakana Teina

Tuakana teina

Today is tuakana teina day with room 4. this means coming together

and working with a student from another class. The buddy that I am working

with is Tiare she thinks having a net book is awesome because it’s fun and easier to do our work on.

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My Poem Analysis - Term 2 2013

WALT read a poem and analyse the language features of a poem.

Tickling the swans the river rushed passed,

Eating the reeds like it's a race,

Wildly hammering against the river bed,

Spitting water droplets,

Rapids exploding in the air,

Kicking the river banks while sweeping past,

Waves sprinting,

Splash!

Crash!

Barging it's way into the locks,

Gushing, gushing, gushing!

1. Summarise the poem you have read in your own words.

• The poem I read this week is about how a river moves along and what the water does as it moves.

2. Identify at least 2 different language features in the poem and give examples. You can identify more than 2 language features.

One of the language features in this poem is personification. Here is an example of this language feature...Waves sprinting

Another language feature in this poem is an onomatopoeia .Here is an example of this language feature...      Splash!

Crash!                

Peter crystal and Kamaka's Cyber smart Footprint

Cyber Smart - Smart Footprint

What is a digital footprint?

A digital footprint is a data that traces someone's activity in a digital environment. Digital footprints can be traced in an electronic fashion, of memories and moments and are built from the interaction with TV, mobile phone, World Wide Web, Internet, mobile phone. They record everything you do on the internet.

What does the word ‘reputation’ mean? How does this word relate to ‘smart footprint’?

Reputation is what we have on the internet and how people look at us online.

Describe your digital footprint - what kind of online reputation do you want to have?

I would like to have reputation online as an honest and respectful  person.

Identify at least 5 effective ways of having a smart online digital footprint.

*Never give out your personal information.

*Be respectful to others online and use the right language that means not swearing and saying bad things to others.

*Use your common sense and don't talk to people you don't know online.

*Use appropriate web sites for the right purposes.

*Be responsible online

Peter,Crystal and Unique's Cyber smart Brochure

Rubbish In Our School.

This is a presentation that Loni Simon and I did  about rubbish If you like our presentation
please leave a comment.

Should Cigarettes Be Banned?

Should Cigarettes be banned?

I think yes because it stops wasting less money and you can buy the things you really want  

instead of smokes.

You could spend more time with your family and spend the money on more important things than cigarettes. Like your children and family.

You are going to ban cigarettes.

I think you should ban cigarettes because it can kill lives and ruin peoples lives. It can also harm and influence our community and younger ones to start smoking.

You should ban cigarettes because it can harm our younger ones and if you are a mum and you’re pregnant, you could kill your younger one inside.

Smoking is bad and it should be banned. So stop before you put a cigarette in your mouth and start to realise that you could harm anyone in your family.

The Flying Carpet

The Magic Flying Carpet

Every picture tells a story.

Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the picture.

Where is the carpet going? Why?

What problem is caused? How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are - what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit-add or delete words or sentences to improve your work

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The characters in the story are james and His parents and the problem is when james slips of the cliff.

Once upon a time there was a little boy called james in india  that always dreamed for a magical thing like a flying carpet. later that day he saw a carpet fall from the sky He thought It was a flying carpet  so he ran to the carpet that fell from from the sky.” really is it a flying carpet James said”.

What a surprise shouted James.James the little boy grabbed the carpet and ran to go show his parents.MUM DAD he shouted look mum look dad I found a flying carpet James said how surprising said mum dad really wasn't interested.

After showing his mum and dad he walked up a humongous cliff when he was on top of the cliff he holded up the carpet and counted to five

1 2 3 4 5 he let go of the carpet and it flow down the cliff .” maybe it’s not a flying carpet at all he said”.Until suddenly he slipped and fell off the cliff uuuuuuuuuuuuu he shouted  he saw his carpet fly right across him and caught him” could it be is it really flying he said wooooo hooooooo he shouted” I'm flying.

Topic Vocabulary

This is a presentation to show you what words we have been learning  about and what these words mean.

blog commenting

Three States Of Matter

This is a presetation of what solid liquid and gas means from Kamaka and peter.

US Navy's new Unmanned plane.

This is a presentation  of  6 hats current events.

Where Did They Go Jaffa Experiment

This is a presentation that Edward,Renee,Sam Unique and I  done for our experiment

How To Play The Worlds Hardest Game

This is my presentation on how to play the worlds hardest game

A wonderful gift from Will.iAm

Faith,Taylor,Jayden and I got the chance to experience another way of  learning with the Manaiakalani.

A fantastic piece of new which came to us as "Someone donated some money to the Manaikalani education trust" Well we found out that someone was Mr Will.I.Am

I hope you enjoy reading my awesome experience below 

Please leave a comment!!

Thursday 6 May 2013, was well... the best day of our life!!! I’m not being dramatic or anything but a group of students got the chance to see that Mr.William James Adams,otherwise known as Will.I.Am . He has donated $100,000 to the Manaiakalani Education Trust. We were told at first that it was an anonymous donater but when we arrived we got the news that it was Will.I.Am himself who had donated the money.It was something worth experiencing.

When the cheque was presented we were thankful and honored for his helpful donation towards the Manaiakalani Education Trust. His inspirational words motivated us all as students to keep moving forward in life.

The words that he preached today was "My mission is to help transform disadvantaged youths, and I hope my donation to the Manaiakalani Trust will help these young people gain the skills they need for tomorrow's job market."

We acknowledged that fact the he shared a small portion of his life with us about growing up with  only his mum to raise him and about the fact that music and arts literally saved his life. He told us that his dream was to look after his mother and siblings.

When he told us what his dream was we felt like we could do something with our life. Meeting or hearing him wasn’t just hearing or seeing him as a celebrity but we got to hear and see him as a person who motivated himself to succeed in life.

We came back to school feeling glad we got to be part of something worth remembering, we got to be part of something we could tell our friends with pride and experience.

simple fractions

This term I made a presentation abu simple fractions.

A matter of fact

This is my popplet of a matter of fact.

Motivational Topic Experiment

in our group were doing a experiment about solid (ice cubes) turning into liquid.

fraction

this is my popplet of fractions

this is my wordle about fractions

My Ancestral Poem

I am full cook island I am proud to be who i am.

I am a descendant of Aitutaki. Call me a brother a son of

strong Islanders.I come from a strong line of people who

are proud and hard working and who shaped me into who i am

today.I hear the drums beating calling me to come home

I feel the strength love and freedom from god and my village.  

I catch the fish with my hands  from the oceans that

have fed my family for generations.I am proud that my

ancestors give us strength and courage when natural

disasters get thrown at us with strength and

courage we can survive anything.

This is my Ancestral Poem I have created. I hope that you will be brave enough

to leave me some friendly comments. Please include FF and FB about my work!

My Story My life My Autobiography

This week I presented my autobiography in front the class. there are some personal information
I have deteted because I'm being cyber smart

My Four Walls.

This is My Four Walls Of Self About me.Enjoy.

seasons

Back To School Room 7

This film is about what back to school means to room 7. Enjoy this film that the TPS new reporters had made. Please leave a comment.

My goal setting presentation

These are my goals for this term.