The Flying Carpet

The Magic Flying Carpet

Every picture tells a story.

Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the picture.

Where is the carpet going? Why?

What problem is caused? How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are - what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit-add or delete words or sentences to improve your work

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The characters in the story are james and His parents and the problem is when james slips of the cliff.

Once upon a time there was a little boy called james in india  that always dreamed for a magical thing like a flying carpet. later that day he saw a carpet fall from the sky He thought It was a flying carpet  so he ran to the carpet that fell from from the sky.” really is it a flying carpet James said”.

What a surprise shouted James.James the little boy grabbed the carpet and ran to go show his parents.MUM DAD he shouted look mum look dad I found a flying carpet James said how surprising said mum dad really wasn't interested.

After showing his mum and dad he walked up a humongous cliff when he was on top of the cliff he holded up the carpet and counted to five

1 2 3 4 5 he let go of the carpet and it flow down the cliff .” maybe it’s not a flying carpet at all he said”.Until suddenly he slipped and fell off the cliff uuuuuuuuuuuuu he shouted  he saw his carpet fly right across him and caught him” could it be is it really flying he said wooooo hooooooo he shouted” I'm flying.